Final test Opinion Essay (Alvine Labana R.)

Online mobile games phenomenon

            Online mobile games is really popular nowadays, it had a massive impact on mobile phone. As the development of the technology has evolved, mobile games have also become more advanced in every aspect. People with smartphone have playing online games at least once. Age doesn’t matter when we talk about online mobile games, kids, teenager, and adult played it. Most of them addicted to it and had an unhealthy playtime. The mobile gamers are increased significantly days by days and became a phenomenon. This phenomenon happens in Indonesia and Sukabumi is not an exceptional. Online mobile games spread quickly in Sukabumi as well. In fact, online mobile game phenomenon is a serious case in Sukabumi. For example, Radarsukabumi reports that there are 38 kids that addicted to online mobile game and need a rehabilitation since 2018. However, online mobile games is not good if we play it too much and here are the reason why.

            First, I believe online mobile games are addictive. It seems obvious that online mobile games is addictive, it’s really fun and the players can play it everywhere. In this case, kids are the victim of online mobile games phenomenon. Nowadays, the parents gave their kids a smartphone so easily and I think it’s not a good thing. In Sukabumi, we can easily find a bunch of kids gathering in a place like coffee stall, café, wifi corner, etc. playing the same the game for hours. It’s not really good to play too much, it will make everyone addicted to the game as soon as possible, not just the kids. Once we get into the online mobile, we can’t stop easily from it. It will make us want to play more, more, and more until we reach the most glorious victory. Then, we can’t stop thinking about it and spent the entire free time just to staring at the phones all day. After that, we will get addicted and try to play online mobile games as much as we can. It will make us became a lazy person that won’t do anything except playing online games. We should keep an eye on our playtime in order to prevent ourselves from online mobile game addiction and think carefully before giving a smartphone to the kids.

            Second, based on what I know kids will get used to the bad words. In online mobile games we can do a text chat and voice chat, it’s a standard for an online game. But, some players use it in a wrong way. When they loses the games, they will express themselves uncontrollably and use a bad words as much as they like. What I mean is, there’s a lot of kids played the games and some of them learned the bad words from it. The kids that get used to the bad words will use it at their friends in real life to insult each other. I think the kids with bad words will spread quickly in Sukabumi, because there are so many online mobile gamers that are children in Sukabumi. To be honest, it’s really annoying to hear the bad words from the kid’s mouth. It’s wrong in every way for kids to use the bad words. Even though I’m older than them, I still not get used to use the bad words.

            Next, I strongly believe that physical health and mental health will be affected by online mobile games. The online mobile games will make the players ignore their needs, like eat, sleep and socializing with people. The people with online mobile games addiction will play with their phone everyday until they exhausted. I think the more they play, the more they torturing themselves.  Playing too much online mobile game will affected the vision as well. It will force the eyes to do the overtime work and cause eyes problem such as red eyes, dry eyes, eye strain, etc. Beside of physical health, online mobile games can attack mental health as well. The online mobile games usually forced the players to win the games and when they lose, the players will causing harm to everything even themselves. They will feel anger, anxiety, and regretting their lost in games. They will express their feeling furiously like throwing their mobile phone, punching object, shouting a bad words, and sometimes harming themselves. Somehow, it will make the players have an aggressive behavior. The online mobile games will make the players ignore their social life too. They won’t care about their surrounding and became an apathetic people.

            To sum up, I believe that the online mobile games are the great development of technology, but it’s bad for us if we played it too much. Addiction is a great threat to everyone who played it, and it causes so many bad effects physically, mentally, and behavior as well. According to the addiction kids cases in Sukabumi, online mobile games effects aren’t a thing that we can ignore. We should be aware of it and keep ourselves safe from online mobile games phenomenon.

Alvine Labana R.

1830911039

Revisi I

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Online mobile games phenomenon

            Online mobile games is really popular nowadays, it had a massive impact on mobile phone. As the development of the technology has evolved, mobile games have also become more advanced in every aspect. People with smartphone have playing online games at least once. Age doesn’t matter when we talk about online mobile games, kids, teenager, and adult played it. Most of them addicted to it and had an unhealthy playtime. The mobile gamers are increased significantly days by days and became a phenomenon. This phenomenon happens in Indonesia and Sukabumi is not an exceptional. Online mobile games spread quickly in Sukabumi as well. In fact, online mobile game phenomenon is a serious case in Sukabumi. For example, Radarsukabumi reports that there are 38 kids that addicted to online mobile game and need a rehabilitation since 2018. However, online mobile games is not good if we play it too much and here are the reason why.

            First, I believe online mobile games are addictive. It seems obvious that online mobile games is addictive, it’s really fun and the players can play it everywhere. In this case, kids are the victim of online mobile games phenomenon. Nowadays, the parents gave their kids a smartphone so easily and I think it’s not a good thing. In Sukabumi, we can easily find a bunch of kids gathering in a place like coffee stall, café, wifi corner, etc. playing the same the game for hours. It’s not really good to play too much, it will make everyone addicted to the game as soon as possible, not just the kids. We can’t stop easily once we get into it. It will make us want to play more, more, and more until we reach the most glorious victory. It will lead us to the laziness because when we get into it, we can’t stop thinking about the online mobile games and forgot about everything. We should keep an eye on our playtime in order to prevent ourselves from online mobile game addiction and think carefully before giving a smartphone to the kids.

            Second, based on what I know kids will get used to the bad words. In online mobile games we can do a text chat and voice chat, it’s a standard for an online game. But, some players use it in a wrong way. When they loses the games, they will express themselves uncontrollably and use a bad words as much as they like. What I mean is, there’s a lot of kids played the games and some of them learned the bad words from it. The kids that get used to the bad words will use it at their friends in real life to insult each other. I think the kids with bad words will spread quickly in Sukabumi, because there are so many online mobile gamers that are children in Sukabumi. To be honest, it’s really annoying to hear the bad words from the kid’s mouth. It’s wrong in every way for kids to use the bad words. Even though I’m older than them, I still not get used to use the bad words.

            Next, I strongly believe that physical health and mental health will be affected by online mobile games. The online mobile games will make the players ignore their needs, like eat, sleep and socializing with people. The people with online mobile games addiction will play with their phone everyday until they exhausted. I think the more they play, the more they torturing themselves.  Playing too much online mobile game will affected the vision as well. It will force the eyes to do the overtime work and cause eyes problem such as red eyes, dry eyes, eye strain, etc. Beside of physical health, online mobile games can attack mental health as well. The online mobile games usually forced the players to win the games and when they lose, the players will causing harm to everything even themselves. They will feel anger, anxiety, and regretting their lost in games. They will express their feeling furiously like throwing their mobile phone, punching object, shouting a bad words, and sometimes harming themselves. Somehow, it will make the players have an aggressive behavior. The online mobile games will make the players ignore their social life too. They won’t care about their surrounding and became an apathetic people.

            To sum up, I believe that the online mobile games are the great development of technology, but it’s bad for us if we played it too much. Addiction is a great threat to everyone who played it, and it causes so many bad effects physically, mentally, and behavior as well. According to the addiction kids cases in Sukabumi, online mobile games effects aren’t a thing that we can ignore. We should be aware of it and keep ourselves safe from online mobile games phenomenon.

Alvine Labana R.
1830911039